The Final Decision.

After playing both versions of our opening to a focus group of our target audience, we came to a decision to submit the version of our opening without the voiceover as our piece. We were told that a voiceover would have been good if it was constant but only having it occasionally made it seem disjointed. I am happy with the decision made, although I did like the concept of a voiceover, in practise, it wasn't what is best for the quality of the film.