The Story of Us: Final edit with voiceover

Here is The Story of Us (almost) finally edited. We cannot come to a decision as to whether we need to include a voiceover or not, having received some feedback from our teacher saying that she found the voiceover unnecessary if it is in only parts of the film, and suggested we make two final edits; one with a voiceover and one without. We will show these two versions of our film to two small groups that have not seen it before, so they do not provide a biased decision. We will play this version to one group and the version without the voiceover to the second group as we ask the question (or something to the effect of) 'what are your opinions on the voiceover?' or 'does this lack anything in terms of sound?' depending on which version they are shown.